Page 1: It was just another beautiful Sunny day for the brown wiener dog Dexter, he woke up as joyful as can be.
Page 2: Being an only dog, he was showered with all the love and food he could imagine.
Page 3: Since he has been a pup, he has had numerous adventures with his humans. Endless road trips, walks to the park, movie nights, swimming in the lake, the list was endless!
Page 4: One day his humans surprised him and brought home another puppy home, he could not believe it.
Page 5: Mom´s novio was trying to replace him!!!!!
Page 6: She was completely oblivious to his evil plan.
Page 7: The puppy´s name was Oso, he was half Dalmatian and half husky. Mom was completely in love with him!!
Page 8: Mom was spending more time with Oso than with Dexter and he hated it. He acted on his best behavior to see if they noticed but they never did...
Page 9: Oso didn´t even speak English, just Spanish, right off the bat Dexter was way smarter than him.
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Page 1: It was just another Sunny day for the brown wiener dog Dexter, he woke up as happy as can be.
ReplyDeletePage 2: Being an only dog, he was showered with all the love and food he could imagine.
Page 3: Since he has been a pup, he has had numerous adventures with his humans. Endless road trips, walks to the park, movie nights, swimming in the lake, the list was endless!(has been and was-past tense disagreement)
Page 4: One day his humans surprised him and brought home another puppy home, he could not believe it.
Page 5: Mom´s novio was trying to replace him!!!!!
Page 6: She was completely oblivious to his evil plan.
Page 7: The puppy´s name was Oso, he was half Dalmatian and half husky. Mom was completely in love with him!! (You could put this page before page 5 and 6 to explain the character first before discussing his motives)
Page 8: Mom was spending more time with Oso than with Dexter and he hated it. He acted on his best behavior to see if they noticed but they never did...
Page 9: Oso didn´t even speak English, just Spanish, (add a period and start a new sentence) right off the bat Dexter was way smarter than him.
Your story is very creative and I think making a bilingual book is unique. I think the kids will love this story. I think it would be very cool if you taught the kids simple spanish words throughout the story (that may be your plan already).
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Page 1: It was just another Sunny day for the brown wiener dog Dexter, he woke up as happy as can be.
Page 2: Being an only dog, he was showered with all the love and food he could imagine.
Page 3: Since he has been a pup, he has had numerous adventures with his humans. Endless road trips, walks to the park, movie nights, swimming in the lake, the list was endless!
Page 4: One day his humans surprised him and brought home another puppy home, he could not believe it.
Page 5: Mom´s novio was trying to replace him!!!!!
Page 6: She was completely oblivious to his evil plan.
Page 7: The puppy´s name was Oso, he was half Dalmatian and half husky. Mom was completely in love with him!!
Page 8: Mom was spending more time with Oso than with Dexter and he hated it. He (even) acted on his best behavior to see if they noticed but they never did...
Page 9: Oso didn´t even speak English, just Spanish, right off the bat Dexter (knew he) was way smarter than him.
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I really love the idea of your story! I also think the name Oso is super cute. I did put in parentheses a few extra words you could add here and there to your story. I can't wait to see where you go with this!